All Comments on 'Desert Flower Ch. 01'

A statement of shared sexuality. She is no longer a girl, she is a woman who knows what she wants, he is a mature man, who knows what a woman wants, and I am a reader who wants to know how this story continues, is enough question with this?

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

The intro was great, more please

Yes please.......Can we have some more ??

I am asking. Just as you requested.

Please Sir, can we have some more. Your description was very good, as well as graphic and erotic. Enjoyable, and just the right length.

...the artful codger....

I'm with them. "Please, sir, may I have some more?" Lots to explore with these two and Grandfather, currently offstage.

Give us more....

More please!

Story by one of my favorite authors. Tell us more of the adventures of these two

We need more. Who are these two people? How did they happen to be physically and metaphorically where they are?

What's next?

Please continue.

You know I have to ask. But you never answer with a second chapter.