All Comments on 'Desert Overnight'

by MishaPearl2

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Was Loving this series and then....

Have no idea why you had him rape the waitress and maybe get her preganant. She doesn't even live in the same town. Now he just goes around hypnotizing, raping, and possibly impregnating women anywhere? Especially knowing she wanted to wait. So another baby without a child. Really ruined it. Plus he's old and already came three times in a few hours and he can. Get it up and cum again that quick. Ruined a good series

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2almost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous

I appreciate you were liking the series. Carter has clearly evidenced his own predatory views and ethics throughout. He also has demonstrated he has a strong sexual drive and recuperative ability. His taking advantage of Luz is hardly shocking. MP2

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