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All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 05'

by electraslade

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

too short

worshipper622worshipper622about 10 years ago
Could be longer........

....but, it has a nice twist to it. Keep it going.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
I gave it a three

I gave it a three, didn't deserve anymore.

Come on five chapters of BS, a slow build up is one thing but your taking this teasing chapters too far, good thing it's not on paper it would be a waste of paper.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Well written

Plot is interesting - suspenseful. English is excellent within the context. Please go on!

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