All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
hope mom joins u 2

Hope next chapter includes wife with you 2

kaisermatthiaskaisermatthiasabout 10 years ago
Just keep writing

Gaps happen, but share as you finish!

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
Spanking more?

Sure hope all of her friends are going to get their bare bottoms and pussies spanked together for their birthdays...that sounds sooooooooo HOT!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story looking forward to future chapters

Of course wife has to get into action, GF Stephanie cherry popped by Brandi's Step Dad, you left this story to go into a lot of great directions.

Let's hope Brandi doesn't get pregnant right away from step-dad :)

Thanks for writing the story with additional chapters.

50+ male USA

sabra16023sabra16023about 10 years ago
NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED

We need more chapters to a good story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nicely written

I usually heave at the taboo stories but I think this is beautifully and sensitively written. Please don't spoil it with mother daughter incest. The friends being involved would be fine and some s and m but please no icks x

CassieKCassieKabout 10 years ago
This is really hotting up!

God!! What a lucky girl, now Brandi has to tell Stephanie who wants some of the action. Keep the story going, its really got me on " high beam ".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hymen

That hymen sure was a long way in (unless you have a short dick).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
very nice

Very hot story. Well written and told. Keep what ever plot YOU have in mind. You seam to have a great mind for it

Thx

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yess

its so hot,..more please. xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Okay these are enjoyable.

I'm a little shocked that I am enjoying these, but would love to point out one issue. The hymen is not inside. It is extra skin which makes the entrance much smaller unti it is penetrated the first time. If you do not believe me or some moron claiming to be a doctor says it is internal I would love for you to ask an actual doctor and also look up in google images for photos or drawings of the hymen and it's location. I promise it is exactly where I am telling you it is located.

Knowing this information and using it in other stories will earn you 5 * ratings from those of us who are aware of where our hymens were located before they were torn or ruptured with our first penetration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Absolutely MORE Chapters😊 and I've only finished up to 10, But I've Loved them ALL

Well it's back to 'One Handed' reading, ( lol ), and of course my little Thong is holding my little 'Jeweled Plug ' snugly in place while I read and play with myself, And SUPRISE, I'm a GUY 😋

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It took me an hour to read all of this, I was jerking off to it all, and I came right at the climax with them. So hot!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I came 3 times I like the way you think

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