All Comments on 'Desolation Sound'

The first half had very long paragraphs that seemed incongruous with the second half. And you didn't give us any satisfaction (sexually, I mean) either.

I had visions of my mother smoking and her lips wrapped around the smooth filter of the cigarette as she sucked it.

Do more of both of you smoking adds a very sexy vision

I like the way you are dealing with a taboo subject that many of us find exciting but can never discuss. I like the build up and the way you describe staring at the mom as she showers. Can't wait for the end of the story.

Sexy and hot! I really loved it!

Wow another very good story!!!!!