All Comments on 'Desperate Measures'

Yep. You can write some stories all right. Good story and characters. Thanks for proofreading your work so well.

This was fun to read I kind of want another chapter just to see were this can go.

I liked it, a good story with an unusual plot.

Well done, 5/5

mindfuckery... meh

I really enjoyed this story, especially the ending. I don't know if there will be a sequel - it doesn't really need one, but if you do write one please tie it somehow to this one. Thank you very much.

Great story telling, there should be more chapters to it. I like the characters

This is a great story, as I always say I like a bit of humour with my sex ( or should that be the other way round ), yep you can sure tell (sell) a story. Yes, it flows well with no annoying typos or pronunciation glitches to get in the way, well done .

This is your brain on paganism

We well muscled ChristChads laughed at you then, and we laugh even harder now.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

What in the actual fuck?

Indeed you can write some interesting stories, my friend.

Amazing story! The characters, pacing, plot, and sex were all excellent. I loved the pagan ritual twist since I'm one myself. And the surprise ending was unexpected and very hot! The ritual achieved its goal, even if it wasn't the one Arthur was expecting. I'd love to see more stories with these characters, maybe where they start their own pagan group with like-minded individuals or siblings. Five stars!

Fabulous story, I love the original plot as well as the great detail and pacing!