All Comments on 'Desperation Ch. 01'

drop the oversized tits and dicks no one wants to read about your shit. go back to school and learn, if she had sex with nine guys and they wwere to small to break her hymen then they were less than an inch long. delete the unrealistic crap and stop writing. most serious readers will stop after the first paragraph like i did.

A six foot nine inch slut? Really? Do you seriously think this is erotic? This is garbage. As stated earlier makes us wonder if you are a virgin yourself. You know shit about sex.

Good job don't listen to that dumb shit those needle dicks wrote.

This really was an act of desperation, the whole premise of the story is fucking ridiculous. Get some sex education before writing any more.

Sorry to be so blunt, but please do not write a second chapter, as stated by others the scenario and the facts were just silly

Got it. No chapter 2, no more stories about any Seriff ever. No hard feelings just read this and understand that I know the story sucked.

Not sure how I can say fun story, with all the emotional and physical pain, but it was.

thanks and keep writing this sounds like a fun family.....

I actually thought this story was pretty good, you Should definitely keep writing, ignore all the assholes, i Look foreward to reading more from you :)

I liked this story and want to read more about these characters. There's enough quirky stuff going on to lift this out of the ordinary and mundane. Seventeen siblings? (Hints that some of them are identical?) Hidden staircase? A 6' 9" girl with only a 30" ribcage? Strange, but intriguing. Keep it coming, please.

and the previous uneducated people that posted. The hymen is further in than an inch and I have personally taken a woman's cherry when she was 5 months away from delivering her first child.