All Comments on 'Dessert'

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rotaryludditerotaryludditealmost 20 years ago
Writing style

Enjoyed your stories, nice to read a well constructed tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

Wow.... I'm ready to explode.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Continue!

You changed his name abit in the story, but I would LOVE to read more about this! Hot hot hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Race to

Rafe and then back to Race?

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