All Comments on 'Dessert-In-Law'

I got to where Clara said she works 4 full-times job, six days a week, and had to stop.

6 days is 144 hours. A full-time job is 40 hours per week, so 4 of them would be 160 hours.

If the rest of the story made as much sense as that did, I knew I couldn't stomach it.

I enjoyed the journey of the story. The little witty moments within the main character's thoughts were also nicely placed. Please continue to hone your skills and share your art. And thank you.