All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 00'

...you prick. Wouldn't be so bad if your story was at least half decent.

before posting a new story

He does need to work on his English and writing skills but his concepts are really good and interesting and he knows how to keep his audience in suspense and wanting more. I for one am a fan of his stuff. I remember how rough my own work was at his age and how much it's changed over the years. Van, don't listen to the haters, keep writing. Never give up on your dreams. You got the vision and you're a great story teller. The skills will come with practice and time. Keep up the great work. :)

All I see is comments from people not brave enough to put their name to them or hell there's even an advert there as well!!

Make a comment / critique if you must but back it up with your name.

Vanalas is a good writer, needs a little help with English but maybe it's not his first language so I can understand... An editor would help as these problems would be ironed out before becoming public.

I find his stories imaginative and interesting, even if slightly innocent. Please make comments useful and encouraging.

This story is a good start to a new series (hopefully). I do hope you the best in your writing. Keep going for you have a curious fan who wants to see where you go with this story.

Welcome back, your other stories will take your time to finish, but they are well worth it. I will be waiting to read them as you finish them.

Keep going,

Aclassylady

Don't be discouraged! Keep to your plans! This seems from your introduction that this could be a very exciting and sexy story. Give Antonio (a sexy name) a dark-haired complexion and sexy chest hair -- he could be a real turn on !

If someone can offer their editing skills to Vanalas instead of criticizing his writing that would be very productive and enriching to author. Even professional writers need the heck of editors. Think twice before commenting. If you have no tact to provide constructive criticism then avoid commenting altogether. Words can be very powerful and hurtful. Most online authors write for their own onjoyment and can care less about hateful comments, but some are very sensitive and stop writing or sharing their work here. We don’t want that happening here to Vanalas.

+++All my love and gratitude to you my darling. Keep it up.

-Lomlei

Vanlas you have not completed wild flower yet what's up buddy