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Anonymousalmost 7 years agoChecking and editing
Please try just a little harder to proof read the work. At the beginning you wrongly named the two main characters!
Anonymousover 6 years agovanalas must be from Boston
Where else do people PACK cars? And I suspect the boot of a car might be what most of us call the trunk?
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I have been successful probably because I have always realized that I knew nothing about writing and have merely tried to tell an interesting story entertainingly. My own experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out the beginning and the end. It is th...
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