All Comments on 'Destined Lovers Ch. 07'

I can't believe the twist turned out to be perfect after all. I'm really into this story.

The suspense is killing me on what is about to happen.

I know you are an amateur but I can see that you will turn out to be one of the best.

love the scrip,the twist and the line up.

Hope you will bring more entertaining stories like this even more. keep up the good work

This was good! A few grammatical errors here and there but the storyline was very intruiging. Hope to see more from you soon!

The way you built both characters and the way ivan is now acting, i doubt if it would resolve the issue, so pls can you just let them reconcile(i hate and love suspense).I'm having this feelings that jake would do nasty things to ivan/noah to make them leave henry.

Keep it up. 5 star

This is the first story that i would comment on after reading this site story more than 2years.

What a chapter!!! If someone that "loved" me put my son in danger like that, my feelings for them would be over . There would be no question.

That's just not something to even put in a story.

Who needs hot sex when a story is this captivating - Yeah, a few grammatical errors but the plot is great. Now on to Chapter 8!

has ivan never heard of the police ,hitman or a restraining order. what a stupid story line .