All Comments on 'Destiny Ch. 04'

by lorraina

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Your ending sucks!

What a let down. This kind of story shouldn't have a fairy tale ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
yuk

weak weak ending. so sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hey, I liked the ending!

Good story, I enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
unexpected ending....

But I liked the ending very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

somehow you have managed to write the perfect fantasy, thanks

Bethicus18Bethicus18almost 14 years ago
I love it entirely!

If there were some way of making it happen to me, I'd give anything. Did you tear this out of my head or what?? It's been my fantasy for years.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
What about her cat?

So what happen to the cat? Did they return to her apartment and get it? Poor cat!

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedabout 11 years ago

I loved it has to be a really good story love the ending.

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