All Comments on 'Destruction Pt. 01'

loved the ending

There is nothing erotic in this sad tale, just hate and cruelty! There are other sites which deal in this. Go find one and don't come back.

I like a good rape story as much as the next person but this way too dark for me. Shame too for the quality of the story was good but the topic was too brutal even for me. *

covered two areas I like

this is the beginning of a pair of serial rapists and any woman should want to protect other women and yes her sons as well because if they continue their actions they will end up getting killed or end up in prison where they become the victims and no mother would want that for her sons i agree i am a dark person but i am not going to continue reading this story line. Retarded if you want my opinion

I don't care how you look at this, it was rape and nothing less. Sexy.....No, erotic.....No this was just sick and should not have been allowed. To the author I say go get help.

Just plain sick. On the wrong site.

...and I HATE RAPE! I hate any sick fuck who sees any value in it. She has the evidence. They sent it to her and when she comes to her senses she will do the right thing as the one poster said and move to protect women society at large as well as her sons from their own wrecklessness by going to the cops.

5 stars I thought that story was extremely hot.

Enough said.

It is obvious that the three comments by Anon are all by the same disturbed guy.

All you have to do to NOT get offended is NOT READ the story!

This is fucked up shit.

gave it a 5 for effort and content. Great read!!

It took me three months to get my wife to show her pussy to our son, then she enjoyed it. She eventually let him lick her and she sucked his cock! It has continued even though he is married now!

Too bad I can't give it less than one star. This isn't even close to being real. Two immature little snots rape their mother? Get real. They wouldn't have the balls to even kiss her. Rape her? NOT LIKELY. Oh yeah. You don't have to compound the lies by pretending she is a hot MILF. That part of your piece of trash is enough to make it totally unbelievable.

STOP ATTEMPTING TO WRITE. YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And how were people supposed to know what was in the story WITHOUT READING IT? Are you really that fucking stupid? Obviously you are.

This is a story of incestuous rape. After reading the first page, I scanned the rest. While some people may like this kind of thing, I don't think it belongs here. That being said, it was also some truly bad writing. And as for the moron who posted "All you have to do to NOT get offended is NOT READ the story!", well let's just say it's a ridiculous thing to say and leave it at that.

You really are an imbecile!

As you read the story, you would have realized at some point, that this was not for you.

That is when you were supposed to stop reading the story you idiot!

But of course you did not do that.

You did not do that and went on to read the full story.

Then because you hated yourself for doing that, your guilt forced you to write all those comments blaming the writer for the poison in your heart.

In fact in your diseased mind, you wanted the story to be far more graphic than it was.

Didn't you?

Do be honest, at least with yourself !!!

Weirdo. Read half and that was bad enough. You should give advance warning of what the story contained. Stay off this site with your twisted mind moron.

What kind of idiot would write this shit. Incest and rape? Get a life. I'm glad I stopped when I did. This is so sick it numbs the mind.

Loved it.

Some people need to get a grip. Censor yourselves.

Okay so this was bad writing as well as bad execution and oh my god the rape in it was just...she's their mother yet they treat her like that ugh

CALLING HIS MOTHER A SKANK....... YOU REALLY DO HATE FEMALES DON'T YOU...SICK,SICK,SICK .

You come to a literotica reading site, and are turned off by what you read. That's like going to a porno shop and renting a movie then being grossed out by the sex going on in the movie. If you don't want to read stories like this, I suggest Dr. Seuss. Signed anonymous because I'm not logged in. The name is Todd!

wooooow great story and graphic sex

Something more rough for a change.

Too violent & too much familial betrayal

Some sick shit here!