All Comments on 'Detained'

this story is amazing. I think i got to read more of yours. :-)

Great story in which the superiority of our sex shows that even satisfying our needs pays of in ways men can only dream about. Very well written in book-form this would be a best seller in no time. With more crime and more sex the only way life should fulfill our needs, when we are on the winning side.

L.O.L. Janice

Got totally immersed in that. A bit like "Biker babe meets Perfection" by kya korday here on lit. Very deep characters without the criminal element. Loved it. Thank you.

This was...WOW!!

I couldn't stop reading!

I read ALL your stories in one night (I couldn't even sleep!)

The characters were so real and vivid!

U really must write more!

~Thanks for sharing.

Great story, I haven't read such a story in this category. I hope to read more of your work.

Just slightly over the top, but I enjoyed it enough to overlook that. I'd have liked seeing a little more diversity in the main character though, and by that I mean some fear and / or concern. It would have humanized her a little more.

incredibly well written - will have to go and read more of your stories !!

keep up the good work