All Comments on 'Detention'

Too short to grasp your meaning of this story. One can only make a wild guess that she was being lured into a cult and brainwashed into thinking she was a, well...slut to serve the order.

Was the story good? It was lukewarm. Was it intense? I don't feel it. Was it non-consent? Doesn't feel like it too. Your concept lean more towards anal sex or mind control since she asked for more. Perhaps then you would see some votes

Her 'God'? Interesting. This belongs in the BDSM category, get it right.