All Comments on 'Detention With Miss Walker'

needs more do they keep going if so for how long

Punctuation is really bad

Pick a point of view and audience! You keep switching between "he/she" and "my/your/our", and it is annoying.

I agree with everyone else about the punctuation and point of view, but your presentation is still excellent. Better than most. More!!!!!!!

More !!!!

Given the miscues cited by others, who cares?

Your message got through.

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Who could ask for more.

The pov did throw me off sometimes, but I still came. Without permission, at that. I love stories of domination. Great job.

I wish that i could have been there. I would have wanted to eat Miss Walkers's after she was fucked. I would have licked tthe cum out of her.

A very excellent story but you need to chose

if miss walker is the reader or a character.

Thanks for the feedback everyone, it's great to hear from you. The original version of the story had 'you' as Miss Walker, I obviously didn't spend enough time checking through when I changed it. I'll hopefully be writing some more soon and I'll edit it all properly when I'm done. Thanks again :)

"NO?" Perhaps it should be titled, "Teacher's Dick." Nice reading and I found it slightly hard to enjoy by needing to determine who was whom or what, but overall the story was great. Keep writing and those who complained should reread some of their own stories for mistakes. . .oh heck, ignore them.