All Comments on 'Deus Ex Machina Ch. 01: Vincenza'

by darkgoddess2478

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
VINNIE THE PEN

worried for naught. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s for DG. this story could have been carried out and possibly into a sci/fi or horror story. Recall I Robot, mlj

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great start...

Well done, darlin'. Looking forward to seeing how the story plays out. ^_^

hornyinwvhornyinwvabout 18 years ago
Great Beginning

Can't wait to see where the next chapter goes from here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Heheheh...

Nice set-up, darling.

And you've been read and reviewed on the Story Review thread in AH.

FtF

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