All Comments on 'Deus Ex Machina Ch. 05: Suffering'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Written well enough to generate emotion

and a heavy disgust towards Shea. I will confess that I do not like the Master slave pairing (perferring Dom/Sub). The master slave verbally abuses, physically abuses and show no trace of any emontion between the pair , except hatred. Unlimited violence normally would not fall under the Dom/Sub where you would expect to find, somewhere a hint of a positive feeling even if it was just in unlocking her the next morning with a hug.

She needs to go in the morning to a hospital, get her abuse documented, take it offically to the police and let this asshole in blue find a different career field (hard to be a cop if you can't have or carry a gun).

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