All Comments on 'Deviant Dorm Rooms Ch. 00 - Prologue'

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AstronomalyAstronomalyalmost 2 years ago

This was a fun short anthology. I liked it. Pacing isn’t much of an issue with these kinds of stories, but they all were rather cookie cutter. 3 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

No real diversity among characters

dialogue was ok keeps your attention sex scenes need to be more descriptive write as if you were there and darin and Erica sex scenes need to be different everytime if they're just going to be having sex all the time

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A sexual being from Indiana. I write stories that I like to read about in a way that I think others will enjoy. Appreciate feedback from readers...especially women as they are hardest to please. Looking for an artist or artists to illustrate. Hope you find these stories entert...

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