All Comments on 'Devil Box'

I hope you will continue this excellent 5-star story. Very well written, excellent story plot, and excellent character development. Like I said, would love to see a sequel after the baby comes.

Wow! I'm super critical of most stories, but then, most stories aren't well-written. This is extremly well-written and powerful.

when Taph feels she's spent the night in the bar, I felt it as well, so yes, a very good sign. The final night also plays well, and again, I feel as if I've been in this for twelve hours. You've drawn out a feeling few authors have the talent to accomplish.

A little development through foreshadowing would strengthen the appeal here, Just a few secrets to help with the build-up.

Oh wow, fascinating bit of religious/horror, well researched for detail