Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Devil Mine Pt. 01'

by Justbecause1011

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 9 Comments
Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 6 years ago
Well done

Hope there will be more

kdlucaskdlucasalmost 6 years ago
Love it!

Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Absolutely brilliant

I love this story. Please write more, he has to come back! 7

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More!

there has to more to this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!

One of the best literotica stories I have ever read.... keep going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
outstanding job

this is one hell of a way to entice readers into wanting more,great job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Oh my gosh right more please.... I need more.

CleevedreamsCleevedreamsalmost 6 years ago
Enjoyed it very much

Love the way you write, I'm learning from it

DreamerByTheDiamondsDreamerByTheDiamondsalmost 2 years ago

Talking heads isn't fun for long periods. Try putting more action between dialogues. Otherwise, it's a fine story.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userJustbecause1011@Justbecause1011
15 Stories
123 Followers
*** I can also be found on Wattpad under Alexis_Green_Writes If you would like to chat or ask questions please feel free to get in touch **** To everyone who has read, commented and voted on Devil Mine and Within thank you! Part four of Devil Mine has been submitted for po...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Devil Mine Pt. 02 Next Part
Devil Mine Series Info