All Comments on 'Devon Horse Show'

I'm from the area the author talks about and I don't doubt that this has happened more than a few times. I gave it a five.

Bravo and nicely done. Would love to hear about the threeway.

Nice job capturing the spirit of the event, the area and its people. And such a hot, hot piece. I'd love to hear more of the tale!

As a Devon resident you surely made me want to attend next year's show! Bravo, and please continue on with the story!

I hope there's a chapter 2 in there somewhere )

great stuff, hopefully this is just the first chapter ; and make sure that there are also some facials in part 2

I've been reading stories on this site for years and this is just so amazing. I just had to comment!

Its been close to 50 years since I've been to The Horse Show, this brings back many memory's. I to had an older woman (about 12 years older) who was my teacher and from whom I learned a lot.

Great story line, loved it all the way through, any follow up ??

An interesting look at another one of your female characters with "attitude". I wanted to dislike her, and thought I would after that mean stunt with Stephanie, but she turned out half way okay...and anyway, that Steph deserved her comeuppance!

Again, I love the way you play with words. This is a gem, for example: "shook like a screen door in a hurricane". What a fresh and on-point image! And it certainly shows you exactly how passionate the moment is. Your verbal images make me feel like I'm participating in the events! Great writing always brings the reader all the way in Well done!

I go to Devon every year and live in the old money world you describe so well. The women here are complex, beautiful and extremely sexy. The lower Main Line, however, has been inundated by "new money" poseurs. Their women are extremely crass and without sex appeal. The true Main Line is now only west of Wayne. Once again, great story.

of a time several years ago when I joined mom and dad at the "Show". A friend of the family, I will call her Mrs. C but will say first name was Catherine was flirting and after the final activities with the sun going down we cound ourselves below one of the bleachers where she treated me to my first blow job. It was amazing. The wife of one of my mom's friends. We cavorted numerous times before I went back to college. Never will I forget the Devon Horse Show!