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by Lady_Erotica

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IrishSmileIrishSmileabout 13 years ago
i like it

you should continue this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Please continue this

ZanysDellZanysDellabout 13 years ago
This story has potential

You bounce quickly from one step to the next to the next. It doesn't flow smoothly. You could add so much more to flesh this story out. It does have potential to be really good. Try reworking it. :)

Andy_BangedherhardAndy_Bangedherhardabout 13 years ago

you know what i think about it Lady. ;) -Mike

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