All Comments on 'Dew Drop Dead'

now that is how i would love to be taken. course me i would have sucked or been sucked a little before all the fun began. but good story and liked the way it proceeded to its very nice end.

... that Beauford would be revealed to be the world champion, and that he lost on purpose after carefully observing the other man's package :).

Nicely done short story. I loved the humorous mind game also in play. I wish Beauford had chosen some foreplay. Yet it was the element of complete surrender that seemed to excite him. As usual your story just gently unfolded. Always enjoy your smooth direct style.

I always enjoy a good first time story but this story was great. The only issue I have with first time stories is; the guys who bottom are never dirty. Whenever I turn a guy out, there's usually a lil bit or a lot of peanut butter to clean up.

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