All Comments on 'Diagnosis Murder Ch. 03'

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sugarfairy1137sugarfairy1137over 16 years ago
Poor Jess

Just once, I would like Jess not to be hurt in this relationship. I feel so bad form them everytime something happens to him. Hope to read more.

HendrixieaHendrixieaover 16 years ago
More Please

This series is just great! I like the other person who has commented on this story would love to read a chapter or two were Jesse is not hurt so much. I would also love to read the story of how Steve and Jesse got together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
lol

isnt it funny how the safe doctor get hurt more than the cop

? lolololol love the story tho

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Decent but lacking...

I really wanted to like all of this story but it didn't quite have that sizzle that it should have. There were a lot of hot sex scenes but then you seemed to repeat yourself and they got boring. You could have combined the "prequel" an ch.1 and just made that your whole story. I loved that there was a dominant and submissive touch to your story though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Grand series, but seems like poor Jesse keeps getting hurt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Sure is unfortunate that to make such a great series jesse has to get hurt so much, :p But, oh well, coz those incidents sure do help to create a very dramatic and fantastic story. Well done.

alexandra36alexandra36over 13 years ago
Poor, poor Jesse!

LOL. gosh, I really felt bad for poor Jesse! He keeps getting beaten up, hurt, and tortured. poor guy! maybe he should take some kung fu or some martial arts to help himself.

great reading!

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