All Comments on 'Diane on Cam Ch. 01'

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Gina_B_33Gina_B_33about 7 years ago
Nice buildup

I think this a very nice buildup to another hot ending by SDS.

I can't wait to read Part Two.

Gina

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

im assuming this is in incest category because its the dads computer you hinted at not the curve you tried to throw with trey which fell flat. otherwise why is this in the incest category? hope you clear up why the dad was seen unfit to look after his own daughter by the mother. also daddy daughter dont do much for me so ill see with your next installment whether to read through the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Terrible progression.

This story is moving along way too slow. It was boring.

Posy_ChurchgatePosy_Churchgateabout 7 years ago
Slow burn

This story starts with a slow burn - very solid character building & scene setting - can't wait for part II! (Which Does Not Disappoint!)

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