by dominanceaddict1
Not a fan of the new incest angle. At all. But I've enjoyed this series immensely and you ended it on a note that left me wanting more, so I won't give up on it just yet. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter as usual.
Im always looking forward in reading more i cant wait for the two to do more than fourplay all in all its a good story
Love this series.
Two issues, one being the abnormally large cock and now this incest angle. I also hope it gets dropped and is just to emphasize his charisma and dominance .
Assuming wife gets involved next which is ok, but would hope he gets fucked (finally) first.
Nevertheless , not complaining overall. Great series , love the power exchange, gradual acceptance and mindfucks plus muscle .
Really good writing. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.
And with this chapter, this series has officially jumped the shark. Such a shame because the first 3 chapters were hugely promising. I give this chapter 5 limp dicks and am checking out from further chapters.
Eh. Not into this so much anymore. Getting ridiculous. Each chapter more ludicrous.
Not into the incest angle or dressing Jerry in woman's clothing but still loving the physical descriptions of Ryan/Dick!
Jerry must have been so proud walking out of the park with Ryan squeezing his ass and showing everyone that Jerry was his girl. Knowing that he had swallowed Ryan’s cum and it was now in his tummy must have been wonderful. He probably was even proud of the fact that he had visibly cum in his own pants just from the thrill of handling Ryan’s cock. No wonder he went up on his tiptoes to kiss Ryan, thanking him for the day in the park, for the cute outfit, and for protecting him from those tough guys. I bet it was a long sexy kiss, with Jerry not wanting to break it off. I’m surprised they didn’t go into the car so that Jerry could give Ryan a nice slobbering blow job.