by Egmont Grigor
I thought it was great. A sense of humor is a terrible thing to waste and it's good to see that you've put it to good use. Thanks.
I see we still haven't gotten used to your New Zealand style of writting...Some are to Americanized to read
other styles and enjoy it.. For the rest of us "Yanks"
just keep them coming and we'll enjoy them...Don
I really liked this story. Full of good stuff, however there were a few grammer errors that threw me off when reading it a few times. Otherwise a great story
"I'll let you fucks me", but need editorial help.