by Nanaya
Love the alternating perspective showing their thoughts, building up to and leading up to their sex--oh so steamy and hot--plus so well-written! No detail overlooked and very addictive reading. 5
This is so so relatable. And he fell in love with her fromother the start. He just doesn't know yet. She fell in love with him the second his hands were on and in her. Yes I've fallen in love that way too. Gosh his fingers drive me insane....
This story is so good. I should have been asleep three hours ago!!! Cannot wait to read the rest of this story.
I have read one heck of a lot of erotic stories in my life ...but Yours ,this one is, the "hottest" story, that I have ever read...the most erotic, descriptions of I have ever read! a really great story of a couples first time..felt like I was sitting right there watching...very, very well done! If this story does NOT leave you totally satiated..then I feel for you!