by HeyAll
Thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this story.
Heyall
To the previous comment, of course she won. You can't beat Dolores and her magic.
Heyall
Strange premise + great writing = great story. Heyall, I don't know how you do it but keep it up! Really enjoyed reading this and I love how different this story was from the usual roommate trope.
The only thing that didn't work about the story was the title - it gave a very different cast to the writing.
I love your stories and this is my favorite of your recent stories. Thanks.
Great story, thanks.
I didn't love the locker room scene at the end, but really not sure how else it could have ended.
I absolutely love your stories! Your imagination is so wild and free to explore and give us great stories! Please keep writing!!
Great, maybe even slightly believable, story line. Great imagination if not. I agree that the title didn't fit the piece-not even after it was read. I also saw no reason to have the coach walk in on them-an unnecessary interruption to an otherwise very interesting and sexy story.
Stranger things have happened. 😎
Thanks for a great story!
Great story,sensual, erotic & sexy. Healers know their medicinal qualities for natural remedies. Could of used such healing for my hamstring pull running track. The coach at end was sort of let down with wondering where her star runner might be. Imagination is wonderful