All Comments on 'Dinner Party Group-Orgasm'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 5 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

Thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this story.

Heyall

NudistGinaNudistGinaover 5 years ago
Very nice story.

But did she win the race?

HeyAllHeyAllover 5 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

To the previous comment, of course she won. You can't beat Dolores and her magic.

Heyall

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Strange premise + great writing = great story. Heyall, I don't know how you do it but keep it up! Really enjoyed reading this and I love how different this story was from the usual roommate trope.

ndeavourndeavourover 5 years ago
Unique and delightful

The only thing that didn't work about the story was the title - it gave a very different cast to the writing.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 5 years ago
Very nice

I love your stories and this is my favorite of your recent stories. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fun and flirty

Great story, thanks.

I didn't love the locker room scene at the end, but really not sure how else it could have ended.

Advice_GirlAdvice_Girlover 5 years ago
What fun!

Very nice fantasy.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 5 years ago

I absolutely love your stories! Your imagination is so wild and free to explore and give us great stories! Please keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
General agreement

Great, maybe even slightly believable, story line. Great imagination if not. I agree that the title didn't fit the piece-not even after it was read. I also saw no reason to have the coach walk in on them-an unnecessary interruption to an otherwise very interesting and sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
cute story

A very cute story

Rapier875Rapier875about 4 years ago
But did she win the race ?

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another great story

Sex, humour and well written. Thanks.

XactoXactoabout 3 years ago
Never mess with healers.

Stranger things have happened. 😎

Thanks for a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story,sensual, erotic & sexy. Healers know their medicinal qualities for natural remedies. Could of used such healing for my hamstring pull running track. The coach at end was sort of let down with wondering where her star runner might be. Imagination is wonderful

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