All Comments on 'Dinnertime'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
sensous and very visual

Very well written... while not long it was a very graphic use of text...

collegelezcollegelezalmost 17 years ago
Dripping

Fantastic story, it was not too much nor too little. Very good job, and yes, your story has me a little wet. Good job.

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