All Comments on 'Dirks Donuts Pt. 02'

Overall, a great story. The Becca relationship was a bit rushed, but still 5 stars!

I truly did not want this part to end! A couple of small things did not lessen the great pleasure I get from reading your writing. I am very eagerly awaiting part 3. 5 stars, again!!

What a wonderful, fun romp! You did well! Not surprising, since I have enjoyed many of your stories, but deeply appreciated. Thank you for writing Dirk as a decent fellow, willing to stop being with Mari when Becca asked, and for writing Becca as strong enough to ask him to stop. I appreciate the details of farm life, love the Swedish language inclusions (thanks for providing the definitions), and the pacing. I'm delightfully teased at the ending.

If you'd seen the first comment I had tried to write, you would have laughed...I sounded like a 5th-grader writing my first book report, with disjointed, meandering, tangential thoughts, bouncing around the page in search of a point to be made. I'm glad I had to reload the browser page! All that to say, "I truly enjoyed the story! "

I look forward to the next installment.

Happy New Year!

Good story!

5

Your translation from Swedish are not correct, typical Google translate faults. But I'm impressed that you used åäö. Otherwise good story.

You always deliver the goods, I can't wait to see what is next.

Very good chapter. It was well written and went at a quick pace. I loved the Rebecca - Derek interactions, with the way she gave a little but wanted to hold off on the final prize until they were sure, and the parts about the farm. The farm portion sounded very familiar and realistic to this farm boy.

The Mari - Derek part of the story wasn't my favorite, particularly so soon after Jenny's death, but that actually sounded like something Jenny would have done, so I didn't deduct any points for it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

MARI WAS UNNECESSARY!! BUT THE MANWHORE MC WITH MARI AS HIS FUCKTOY WHILE WITH REDHEAD IS JUST PATHETIC!! THE MAN SLUT COULD NOT EVEN CONTROL HIS URGES!!

2 stars for the manwhore Dirk who did not need to do the final romp with the bitch Mari!!

So far this is a great story, if not the strangest. Can't wait to get to the rest.

Good follow up

Sorry but the google translate to Swedish is horrible. It really throws me, native Swede, off the flow, and the rest of your readers don’t understand it, so what was the point?

The dialogue seems a bit off too. Rebecca seems to describe things extremely thoroughly from the very start.