All Comments on 'Dirty Dreams'

it would have been better if he had used lube and cuddles ,spooned her after instead of sleeping on his side

I had a similar dream the other night but reading this was way better.

Good work, AugustRose. I don't normally browse this category, but I enjoyed your sexy little story. Putting on my editor's hat, I suggest working on varying sentence structure and looking for ways to use more active voice -- instead of "I was enjoying," you could write "I enjoyed."

That said, thank you for posting, and I hope you have more dirty dreams to share.

I loved this story, very erotic and well written. Thanks