by James_Steele
I really appreciate the author's note about the mention of the m/m sex. I was anticipating having to skip by the actual act and was pleased that it was just a sentence or two. I love mom/son stories and this one was awesome! The way the scene was set, the build up and finally the sex was truly spectacular! Five stars and a favorite point!
A well written story. I would hope that some authors would read your story and take note of how well it was written! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thank you.
It's a very well-constructed story, but the ending is not the right one. It ended too soon, I would have read some afterlife.
Great story James, what a fantasy to have, i had similar with my family, but it would have been dad with son and daughter, keep up the great writing
This was one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time. Definitely a 5 star
You couldn't ask for a hotter story than this one. Just a little hint about the brother and sister, then, BAM! Then mom gets wind of it, then ...,.. Well you gotta read this story. Steele is one of the BEST writers here on.Literotica!
Amazingly written. I found myself rubbing my clit so good when the mom watched her kids fuck that first time. Story kept me dripping wet!
Bringing the mom in to the love story between the brother and sister was a good touch but it wasn't enough to fix the screw up when you added the element of the gay sex I mean seriously is the brother gay or straight sounds to me like he is gay and just trying to make his sister and mom feel better
I'm not sickened by the m/m reference or anything, but it really seemed forced in there for no reason whatsoever. I gave this one 5 stars all the same.