All Comments on 'Dirty Movie'

by Nellskitchen

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FlamelotFlamelotover 10 years ago
Not exactly...

Not the ending I thought was coming, but I guess it works.

guy30guy30over 10 years ago
Good start

BDSM isn't my thing, but beyond that you've got a good slow build up going here and the workings of an well written and interesting story. Keep it up! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
keep it going!!!

you could keep going with this story, like when everyone was home and what the conquences were going to be when all was said and done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Different

But it feels unfinished to me. Just the start of what could be a very interesting and very different story.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 6 years ago
Oh My God!!!

This story was such a turn on! But why did you leave me with 'blue balls' by the end lol,PLEASE continue with a part two Nells,I want to see the conversation at the dinner table between Bri,Ani,Adam & Eileen.

Mmmm,it brings a deliciously new way of 'family bonding' out in the open. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please

Please finish this story

Snick6977Snick6977over 3 years ago
Incomplete

Why did you stop there? HF. Please finish this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very well done...thank you.

zooliciouszooliciousover 3 years ago

Need more of you and your fun stories.

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