All Comments on 'Dirty Talk, Clean Fun'

by InventorSpurt

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TryingnottoquitTryingnottoquitabout 4 years ago
Excellent First Submission!

Hot and dirty, just the way I like it.

AJeyeAJeyeabout 4 years ago
Way Fun

Good work, keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Married life

Communication........It's GREAT !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow!

Great story. Keep 'e.m cummimg. ;>)

brookesbrookesabout 4 years ago
Good Start...

Definitely a good start, looking forward to next chapter as they communicate more....

HardBenHardBenabout 4 years ago
AWESOME

What a great story.

Really well written and fabulously erotic.

TamaboneTamaboneabout 4 years ago
Excellent

A great story. Sexy erotic and truthful. This is a story that I feel could really happen and that makes it so much hotter for me. Hope that you continue to write about this couple. Just don't go all porno fantasy. Keep it real.

Wish I could have given it 10 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great believable story

I cannot wait until next story awesome job

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Story

Keep writing your good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

whats wrong with him he wouldnt even kiss her himself as a gratitude for the anal cherry she gifted him before she drove away

instead kept on just looking like a customer looks at whore and letting her kiss him rather than initiating some love for her himself its disppointing to see lack of emotions on his part after the hot anal

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nothing like communication eh? Good story!

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