All Comments on 'Discoveries of a Young Man Pt. 06'

Great story, Can't wait for the next part.

I think that ask for a rating for an umfinished story is a bit much. Personally I neve rate a story until it is finished. What I can say that it shows promise and that it keeps a person waiting for the conclution. Keep up the good work!!

Sorry about asking for ratings, comments, and favoriting. There's a two-fold reason for it.

1. I was told it was smart to remind the reader to do so.

2. Conditioning from other media.

It does not excuse it, but rather explains the behavior. If it is truly a nuisance, I'll change the wording or something. I want it as a friendly reminder, nothing else.

I'm loving these long chapters. Awesome series so far!

Well done! Find development of characters and plot....should prove an interesting "springboard" into other chapters.

Well done.... Sounds like there could be a 3some with Mel and Hope. Plus a little on the side with Freya too...

Love your writing Antarctica77 !!!! Loving this story, love the sex, the tenderness, the sensuality, Mel´s dominance.... all in all HOT !! 6 stars if it were possible !

Still getting better

5 stars. Favorite!