by ghost12_spirit
I have to disagree with the comment from "Anonymous". (I mean, consider the source right? How reliable is a comment from someone who doesn't have the courage to create an account and lurk in the shadows, clearly not in touch with their sexuality enough to share their kinks in a community based on kink? I for one would welcome it, if Literotica would do away with the ability to make "Anonymous" comments.)
While I typically do not read "straight" or "hetero" stories, this one caught my eye and I am glad it did.
Could it have been "more"? Of course.
Did it make my panties slippery? You bet it did! It had me working my upper thighs, creating that lovely pressure on my tiny package that results in my juices leaving my little head and running down along my smooth bits, resulting in that slippery feeling I come here for.
I thought the story was very well written. I enjoyed the tease and build-up. I can identify with the back story of the separation and the pain and hurt that accompanies that and subsequent longing to be physically and emotionally comforted.
Not every story needs to be four pages to be complete and whole. There is a place for stories of this length.
Everyone has an opinion dear, what matters is how you feel about your completed thoughts.
I would encourage you to continue to share your work with us.