All Comments on 'Discovering Her Interest, N.C.U.'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please

Please keep writing

Jedd11Jedd11over 5 years ago
Erotica

I'm loving this little tale so far. I have always detested stroke stories. It seems most people forget the literature portion of Literotica. So it surprises me to say this, but I hope to see the erotica part of Literotica soon. I like a good buildup. I like characters. I like a great storyline with wicked hot monkey sex interspersed. But at some point you do need the wicked hot monky sex.

So please, please continue the story you have running. It's quite intriguing so far. But at some point Trisha needs her peach eaten. Or perhaps at some point, someone discovers what happens, flips the script, and Trisha does the peach eating. But at some point, combine the literature and the erotica. Five stars for now.

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A fan of hypnotism and other control based fetishes, and hoping to give a go at writing! You can find timeline and character profiles at: Spiralsnightclub.com and bonus content at: Patreon.com/sleepyhypno