All Comments on 'Discovering his Inner Alpha'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Months for her to come clean about her damaged psyche? That's a bit much to accept. And the ending was a bit abrupt but overall well written and a different consideration of a troubled relationship.

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