by Doublethink34
It's developing well. Looking forward to seeing where the author takes this next. Hint: It's your story, don't let others tell you what you should or shouldn't write. Well done so far, a very hot and sexy tale!
Agree, its just girls having fun. Its not all about men. Great story and character build up. Lets just say I can relate.
I think it's perfect, just the four of them. Or maybe someone might find a strap-on or two.