All Comments on 'Discovering my Step-son'

by donnamwf50

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Familyguy469Familyguy469almost 7 years ago
Good story

But it could have been another chapter. Dad and stepson both fucking her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Thank you

Fantastic story need more. Wish i was your step son donna.

Love don

BigPopsBigPopsalmost 7 years ago
Another chapter or another story?....

This stands alone eloquently and I have suspicion that our new author has many more wonderful stories hidden in her stepmom's brain. Great work!

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Great story. Had me as hard as his Dad

Wonder if Dad will still get some pussy.

What will Mom tell her daughter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sexy step son

Give Jason a bit od dark chest hair for his chest -- a a good sized pubic bush for mom to watch and taste!

OG4UOG4Ualmost 7 years ago
Excellent story!

Very well written story. I look forward to reading more.

CruzingryanCruzingryanalmost 7 years ago
I'm never reading your stories in public again Donna. U left me with a huge unmanageable Hardon that I had to take care of all by myself, no hit step momma in here

It was utterly hot and wankable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Chapters?

Got as Hell, needs more chapters please.

zigzagman8200zigzagman8200almost 7 years ago
NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS

keep this story going.. i was rock hard as i read this hot story...

mentalmanmentalmanalmost 7 years ago
Home run!

Your first story and you knocked it out of the park! Utterly hot and lots of potential for a continuation. Really like the cuckhold dad angle and her reaction to being watched. I look forward to more of your stories. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very nice!

Your story was hot! Got me hard and very interested from start to finish. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yum

Tantalizing and well-written. Great perspective from the woman's point of view. Loved the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice story

I wasn't quite sure what I would say when I caught the little sneak jerking his little cock, but I would make sure it would be a moment he wouldn't forget. A story along this theme would be very interesting.

RONIN1869RONIN1869almost 7 years ago
NICE! BTW...

...that Literotica Discussion Board thread was (per your question) the right place to promote your story. Congrats on the new submission and looking forward to more stories from you.

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 7 years ago
Is there any way of awarding more than just 5 Stars for this?

Utterly brilliant story. Such a truly horny concept, randy step-mom vs mega horny boy with an 11 inch cock! They both win! I can't wait for more from this author, she produces pure delight as far as I'm concerned. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
DELICIOUS

Dear Donna,

You described beautifully an eleven inch cock satisfying a mature, hot, wet, spurting cunt. Pease give us more of your elegant, descriptive prose.

Kisses, you know...

Jack Auff

NakedwolfNakedwolfover 6 years ago
Discovery!

What a beautiful discovery!

The process is so wonderful to read! You've written it so well

Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
more please

im so hot i cant wait for my son in law to come home,so he can fill me up with his huge black cock

suelin23suelin23almost 3 years ago

great story, brings back memories of my adopted son and my self,

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

This is your typical grab and smash ( no it is not backwards). The husband appears to be a "pimp" for his son. The son does not care that much about his step mother. The mother appears to have been desperate to get married.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 2 years ago

Not a fan of cuckolding. Only 4*

MrViixMrViixover 1 year ago

Finally! A well written story by a writer who knows grammar. ;) Oh, and I loved the surprise ending of the cuckold husband, and her immediately embracing the situation with her new bull.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The father wanted his son to fuck the new wife? Is she going to do more with the stepson? I hoped the son would lick his stepmom all over!

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