All Comments on 'Dishonor'

by WildcatF4F1941

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Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Next chapter please. I like the story a lot. AAAA++++

Motherlessone77Motherlessone77over 2 years ago

either way that mother is still a piece of work aside from a piece of ass. lol

ManoBlueManoBlueover 2 years ago

What a dumb character

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Had potential. I little more detail and hesitation would have been nice. The last scene with mom was unnecessary honestly. Her walking in would have been fine.

OverconfidentSarcasmOverconfidentSarcasmabout 2 years ago

I don't know about anyone else here, but I like to read these stories for... well... the story. Who talks like that? Who behaves like that!? This was like the plot of a VERY cheap pornvideo.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 2 years ago

Good start, but needs more to make it a good story. 4/5

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Sounds like mom is a bitch and wants daughter to herself while he is gone

2⭐️ here

redlion75redlion7511 months ago

It would seem calling his house and saying he was kicked out for sexual assault would be an honor violation for lying.

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I'm a 82 year old retired attorney. Since retirement I have published three mystery novels and about a year ago, a WWII romance novel. That novel had a number of R rated scenes - I got a lot of feedback from readers wanting more, so I wrote a short story, Mom Loves Dad, and pu...