All Comments on 'Distant Outpost Ch. 02'

by mattpantyhose

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Awful

The first chapter was of margininal interest but this crap was way below that. I call stories like this monkey fucking. Total garbage as evidenced by the number of favorites this time around. How do you spell Aaron? Or Aron. Please no more?

Not worth a star

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mattpantyhose over 4 years agoAuthor

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Thank you for your constructive criticism. I really appreciate your effort of making merit arguments, I'll do my best in the future to include your advices in all of my stories. After all that's how we become better authors.

makiri almost 4 years ago

@mattpantyhose Please continue this series. Hope she continues to be more daring with her squad this time

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