All Comments on 'Distant Outpost Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please use quotation marks

Please use quotation marks when someone is speaking and not a dash. It makes a huge difference to readability, because we expect to see " and not -. Using dashes takes the reader out of the moment.

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Currently I have several different sets of stories or universa, if I may use such a sophisticated description: 1. The fantasy world with Aeriella as the protagonist in most of the stories. They are loosely connected by plot, but it is still best to read them in the order in ...

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