All Comments on 'Distractions'

This reads like it was written by a teenaged boy. A porn fantasy scenario.

Ok... yeah its a little immature, but the inherent power dynamic, the slow shift, the bimbo fantasy all make it wortha atleast aread in my opinion. I would have a appreciated abit of a build up, abit more characterisation to make the characters a little less flat. But beyond that I'm not complaining.