All Comments on 'Ditzy Donna'

I have read this countless times over the years. It is a classic.

Once I became accustomed to the absent third person narrative I realized what a hoot this was. Gonna have to grab some of those fake Groucho glasses or similar.

My first wife was known as Crazy Carol. The bone thin waitress at our hang out called me Shithead. We had more mundane adventures but it sure brought back memories. Thanks for the story.

This is great, so funny, can really connect with the characters... well done!

I truly love this story, as I have read it again for probably the third or fourth time. Funny, silly, and heartwarming, this story has it all. Thank you again for a great read.

This is a far cry away from the type of stories I come HERE to read, yet it was one of the most captivating, well-written and enjoyable blends of intellect and emotion I’ve ever read!

Your character development was superlative. The storyline was so incredibly believable that I am strongly tempted to ask if it was “just” a literary rendering of a true story! Nothing else needs to be said except that if you hadn’t thrown that it’s bit of sex in there, I would have HAD to compliment you but also ask you to take this elsewhere.

As it is, it is right where all extraordinary writings SHOULD be: wherever one can find them!

Take a bow!

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC...

I gotta admit ...this ain't usually my kinda thing...BT bro thisss...was I nice story...

beautifully pulled off .

Yes u have written a really great story many thanks

This was so heartwarming and nice. It makes me wish my parents loved each other.

Fantastic to see a proper story getting such wholesome positive feedback - I concur with the other praise. Funny, well constructed and heart warming. Bravo!

Yep

I just LOVE it

...all the way from beginning to end.

shit what they think .. I roared ! Thanks!

I was going to put a 1 star due to the terrible attempt at humor by ridiculous events.

Then real humor popped up... about 3 times.

It's as great a read as the first time I read it!

Thanks. Thanks! Thanks!!!

"Whatever I say three times is TRUE"

This has to be one of the funniest erotic stories I've ever read. Whatever you were smoking when you wrote this story, I want some of it.

A really great story from beginning to end. Thanks for posting it.

Absolutely top-class - I really enjoyed this story, and the original style that kept it moving at just the right pace. I will keep both eyes peeled for more of your work.

Thanks!

its wonderful. I read it while sitting by myself and was bursting laughing each here and then. its one of the funniest stories i ever read.

Really nice read.

Thanks for one of the best reads I've had here.

If I ever hear of a play called Ditzy Donna you can bet your sweet ass I'm going to it.

absolutely fucking awesome. loved the interactions at the all the way house.

Loved every minute of it.

I read this years ago. It's still one of my favorites.

awesome

Put down that cat you sick fuck lmao

oh wow, what a funny story. absolutley wonderfull. a bit wierd the son reading about his olds. but oh so funny.

There's only one way to respond to "Sir, put the cat down!"... the lady should reply with a purrrrfect imitation of the "Catwoman" character while the lad replies deadpan as Batman to make the cliché complete. ;)

OUCH!!! My stomach hurts from laughing, and I've got an upset stomach from avoiding the bathroom so I could continue reading this. I've only been on this site for a few months but damn am I loving your story concepts. I hope you have a sequel set for this because this was awesome!!

Very entertaining and easy to visualize. I hesitate to read more of Kirk's stories for fear of getting to the end of them.

The ending was perfect! Loved it.

Was a great story, i laughed so hard i almost pissed my pants

Been reading literotica for years this was the 1st comment I had to write it was funny and kept me there, and made think of my own donna I let slip away

I really hope that this gets a sequel ... I was laughing so hard and about died at the end it was great

...that is as interesting.

And if only I could get as close. She's as lovely as "Donna!"

truth is a lot of long term marriages begin that way. TK U MLJ LV NV

i loved this story. it was so funny. you may become one of my favorite authors.

This is one of those short stories that I'll be able to recall some time in the future and smile.

That was so funny! Donna was like the best character EVER! Crazy.

really loved the story, you made me laugh a lot ;)

This is a great story, my first favorite on here. The characters feel very real and I honestly like them and love reading about them. Donna and Ralph are so cute together, and you really had me rooting for them the whole time. Even the characters who only appear a few times, like the cops, are hilarious. In addition to creating vibrant characters, you have also done a great job with the setting. It sounds like they live in a very interesting town. Very nice writing, sir :)

This is a classic! I couldn't stop laughing and snorting by the end.

This story is adorable. I could feel the character's rollercoaster of emotions.

There are so many positive points in this piece.

Firstly, the plots are well paced with no dull moment.

The story is somehow predictable but not disappointing at all with a nice twist at the end.

Not to far-fetched and was written as close to reality as possible.

Overall, a must read and a pity to miss.

Yours Truly,

JustAnotherReader.

Thanks for an awesome read. 10 out of 10!

That was awesome. Is the first story in the humour section that has kept me reading past the first page.

Best story I've read all year. Thanks for writing.

The story was amusing and the way you displayed the characters was hilariously funny. the ending was epic. Loved it

Awesome story, the cat-fuck part was hilarious!

Cheers

Great story! Enjoyed it a lot.

I just had to read this one. It was really good and the son's comments were right on. Keep it up!

I could not think of a whitty enough title to my comment that would match the humor and whitt that this story was written with. I hope to find more of your stories when I go back a page or two to click on your name! I could really see this sort of story being true...

I thought it was a little slow it first, but I'm really glad I stuck with it :) Loved the character development and the incidental comedy.

The dialog at the end was perfect, as well.

This is funny as hell. I can't believe it's been around all this time and I just found it today. This is a great story if you like to laugh along with the sex.

This is the best story i have ever read

Funny and Somehow romantic

ok that was like the best thig i've read on literotica. great stuff!

I do not think I would fall for a ditzy dame... I hate pain! Now, the way you spun that story made me laugh. cry and wince so many times that I am branding it and you the best read of this year. so far... 3/27/08. Keep up the funnies...

This story stuck with me for months; enough so that I had to come back and read it again! Excellent work, I wish I'd known a Donna in high school!

BearFeat

Great Story

Really enjoyed your story. It made me laugh and get excited. Don't stop.

This is truly amazing, i had a really fun time reading this

"to the author: You ROCK !!!!!!!!!!"

Great story.

This story really took me back. I knew someone just like her too. I wonder what she's doing these days? Oh well, great story! I hope you're working on chapter 2!

This story was to funny. I really laughed alot. Thanks for a great read.

I shouldn't be writing this, I never do. But (don't ever start a sentence with a butt!) this time it was too good to pass. It is the funniest piece I have read in a long, long time. Here is to ALL-THE WAY!

I do hope you keep the story going. Thank you for the laugh and the tears... sob... MOMMA, why are thou so screwy???

loved the story. by far the funniest story on lit. any chance of telling the story of ralph and loonie louise?

I LOVED IT XDDD it was so cute =). it shows a side of things most people dont think about. as a girl, it was really interesting to see how a guy thinks and how little things that might make a girl insecure (weirdness/snot/farting) can be attractive because of the sense uniqueness she possesses from not caring what other people think.

Really enjoyed that story and it warmed my heart. Thanks

u owe me for the er visit-I busted a gut.rickprince1949.

Excellent job. Well worth the read and the ending was sublime.

I don't laugh much at stories I read, but I found myself hooting out loud with this one. The idea of a story within a story worked well and the comments of the son interjected through out helped to remind you that he was reading it.

This story is awsome.

It's been on the site for a while, but if you haven't read it, please do. It has to leave a smile on your face.

If you have read it, read it again.

Yes, it's that good.

Can 'Looney Louise' be far behind?

Carl

This and you deserve much more than the highest scores - it was withour peer just rumbling from one high to the next.

Absolutely an Upper!!! Bookmark this for a bad day!

True story? What a great imagination and sense of humor to say nothing for your talent and timing.

Damn - that was great. More at interval please.

With Highest Regard

FUCKING AWESOME !!!

In the imortal words of Oliver Twist : Please Sir, can I have some more ?

Ditzy Donna had me laughing to the point of tears rolling down my face .

I'm sure at some time we've all had that shocking moment when it hits home , parents do do sex and we weren't immaculate conceptions after all !

Great piece of writing !

I really loved the story.

Its such a feel good piece, and happy endings are always nice.

Well written, keep it up!

SUPER DUPER!!!!

can we get a sequal?

maybe loiuse's kid? i dunno i LOVED it

good job

(~.^)

Ditzy Donna is wonderful. Who could help but fall in love with her. Thankyou for writting this story.

The best that I have ever read...

Sir Put the cat down! haha, it was fantastic.

I enjoyed re-reading this story very much.

Boyd

Ahh, I haven't laughed to the point of crying in a long time...thanks for writing a story that had me on the floor laughing

I am still grinning from ear to ear. I couldnt stop laughing...Donna is a real trip...i think she set him up at the post office though...lol...the way their son cheered on his dad as he read also fit in perfectly. This was the first comical erotica story i've read and its got me wanting to read more.

Completely unforgetable. I couldn't think of a story more witty and unpredictable than which i've just read. As a teenager, it's a milestone to think of parental figures going through the same frustrations that our generation continues to grapple with everday. I used to resent my Dad's boastfull reminisces of young lust, but having read this story, the empathy I feel for my father far outhances the scepticism I have gained. Excellant job. Keep writing.

This is the best story ever. I laughed, almost cried and laughed some more. Please write more

that was a story with a great heart, thanks

Good job. Great story, you got me angry(with his friend) and laughing with most of the rest

This is the best story I have ever read. I laughed my ass off! It was sweet and cute and funny in all the right places. I didn't even notice it was 5 pages long. I hope to read more from you.

A wonderful tale of the angst of being in love as a teenager. I chuckled many times, especially about the "cat", and it didn't seem long at all. It read very well and you should be proud of that. Keep writing these wonderful stories.

Tony

I think you did a great job of making the whole thing funny and real. I couldn't stop reading it. I also think it was great that you set it up so that they had fun sometimes not just making them have all bad times. I think the ending was great also.

Well scripted and developed... and I loved the humor...

I must have missed this when it first came out. This really is a good story. It's funny, has sex and is set in the seventies when I was going through the same life crisis.

It's strange that the girls we remember the most from those golden teenage years either made us laugh or gave great sex. It's a dream if they can do both!!

Great story!

For a story that aint that sexy this one somehow grabbed my attention and held it. I think it was the subtlety of the dialogue and the interesting and sympathetic characters. Combine that with the nine-irons of humour and you have one hell of a good tale. Just terrific. Well done and truly worthy of publishing.

SN

I want to take a moment and thank both everyone that read this story and those that took the time to comment. It made writing it worthwhile.

Kirk

Wow. How do you come up withn this stuff? I couldn't stop reading this story.

"Sir, put the cat down!"

Too much!

I loved it! i hate looong stories i usually dont even read past the first 3 pages... bcuz although i lvoe reading stories liek this tend to get typical n lame or too afr fetched.... btu this one.... i loved all 5 pages of it.. i clicked the "next buttont" about 10 times b4 i had to face the unfortunate fact it was over =( -->> Great ending im glad u didnt carrying on although im sad ti had to ever end =) i'd be awesome to see this as a sitcom LOL that wud be great

Expertly done.... Great job! I loved the humor and the nervousness of new love and the first time experience.