All Comments on 'Diverging Paths Ch. 02'

Can't wait to read more.

His excuses deny the fact that he gets off hurting people. What's interesting or entertaining about that? I hope she waits for her opportunity to drive her elbow into his throat and end him. That would be a good ending to this drivel.

I love this story. It's got a nice steady build up, and your writing is refreshingly skillful. The girls are hot and the villains are villainous. Best of all, I can already tell that this won't be a magic-dick story. There's a ton of them on Lit, stories where one good rape make a girl go Oh! What a great orgasm, this guy(s) aren't so bad. It's always a little insulting and disappointing. I'm betting that they will have many wonderful orgasms, that can't be helped, (by the girls I mean, you can't help physical responses to stimuli) but it will be a take some time and mental and physical manipulation to break them and shape them into willing participants, IF they ever become willing. At least I think it will. I'm just speculating because I'm excited about the story. It's your show, and I'm a huge fan of your writing already. I can't wait to find out what happens.

I do appreciate the comments and enjoy hearing the from readers, both positive and negative. Please keep them coming. Your opinions and comments validate what I'm doing and hearing your thoughts is helpful. Thank you again!

I like the duality in the story between the two leading females. Looking forward to more! So nice to see an erotic writer with a decent vocabulary as well.

If Anonymous above doesn't like kidnap/nonconsent, they shouldn't read it :)

-Cat

Hang in there folks, I promise I haven't forgotten about my readers! That crazy thing called 'life' has kept me on my toes as of late but I'm not finished with this...not by far!

Thanks for the great comments! Keep 'em coming!

LIT

Sad this story was never finished