All Comments on 'Divisions of the Spirit'

Nice job, touching on a few angles that are unique. Interesting presentation as well, the conversation, some confusion but otherwise clarifying enough not to be boring or repetitive. Good luck with the rest of the comments!

Read it with interest, as well as other stories of yours. This one has merit, although not erotic, and it would have been equally interesting even if you hadn't reached a satisfactory understanding together. Well done!